Talk:Study says poor African American women less likely to receive pap smears

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I've sent this back to development because the language used is definitely not NPOV (especially in title). Please clean up. --MrMiscellaniousHappy Hanukkah22:31, 28 December 2005 (UTC)[reply]

I have the changed the title. Please correct any other small errors you encounter... --Chiacomo (talk) 22:39, 28 December 2005 (UTC)[reply]
I just substituted poor for the sanitized wording:) hope that's ok. Neutralizer 23:23, 28 December 2005 (UTC)[reply]

"African" American women[edit]

I have a real problem with the term. It's about as accurate as "black".

Is there something better available?? Neutralizer 14:47, 29 December 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Not right now, I don't think... And the sources use the term. This article is published... On to the next one. --Chiacomo (talk) 14:52, 29 December 2005 (UTC)[reply]