Talk:Teenage girl shot dead by Swiss army recruit

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I think I have finished writing this article. I would like to ask someone familiar with the Wikinews to check the style, formal requirements on a Wikinews articles and finish it. I have only limited amount of time and wanted to just do the basic factual work on the article. 09:44, 28 November 2007 (UTC)

I did some tidying. I will look at it further in 4 hours or so. --SVTCobra 10:22, 28 November 2007 (UTC)
OK, I finished and polished it. It is published now. --SVTCobra 14:47, 28 November 2007 (UTC)

If the ammunition pictured is not the ammunition used, it should probably not be pictured so prominently. 18:25, 28 November 2007 (UTC)

ehm short sidenote: nowadays the swiss army does not hand out pocket-ammo any more. therefore the text under the picture is wrong. it was a first step in the debate wheter to keep the rifle at home or not. —Preceding unsigned comment added by (talk) 12:32, 29 November 2007 (UTC)