Talk:Thai anti-government leaders escape capture

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I do not like the opening line

In a new setback to the Thai government's efforts to ease mounting political tensions, protest leaders escaped from their hotel Friday after security forces arrived to arrest them.

To me it sounds to sympathetic to the government to be neutral.

--Semajdraehs (talk) 13:11, 17 April 2010 (UTC) I concur. 64.223.101.30 (talk) 02:22, 18 April 2010 (UTC)

The tone does indeed seem sympathetic HaroldWilson'sWar (talk) 02:24, 18 April 2010 (UTC)