Talk:Two Santa Clara, Utah teens in critical condition after lightning strike

Review of revision 1107836 [Failed]

Revision 1107836 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 16:35, 6 October 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Not ready: Articles require a three-paragraph minimum; the last 'paragraph' here is only a single sentence. Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1107836 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 16:35, 6 October 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Not ready: Articles require a three-paragraph minimum; the last 'paragraph' here is only a single sentence. Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 1108429 [Passed]

Revision 1108429 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 18:19, 7 October 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: This should have been a very easy review for somebody; I'd already passed most of the text, just needed the last little bit checked. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1108429 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 18:19, 7 October 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: This should have been a very easy review for somebody; I'd already passed most of the text, just needed the last little bit checked. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.