Talk:Two arrested over Belfast, Northern Ireland fatal shooting

Review of revision 1424008 [Passed]

Revision 1424008 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 16:11, 3 March 2012 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: One sentence had been essentially taken from the source verbatim and then fudged up a bit, which is still a copyvio. I fixed the awkward phrasing in pre-sourcecheck copyedit, but that just made it even closer to the source and in the end I cut most of it entirely. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1424008 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 16:11, 3 March 2012 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: One sentence had been essentially taken from the source verbatim and then fudged up a bit, which is still a copyvio. I fixed the awkward phrasing in pre-sourcecheck copyedit, but that just made it even closer to the source and in the end I cut most of it entirely. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.