Talk:U.S. anti-war mom calls it quits

Typo in the first paragraph: as a dairy page on Monday morning

Should that be "daily" page or "diary" page?

• i added two more sources if anyone wants to use those (:O) -Nima Baghaei ^{talk · cont · email} 14:25, 29 May 2007 (UTC)

Lots of grammatical errors and poorly worded run-on sentences. someone should clean this up.

Frank James source

Why is the Frank James piece being cited as a source. This is in "The Swamp" which is the Tribune's newsblogs and is highly editorial. If we are supposed be doing fact-based neutral reporting, that seems like an odd choice for a source (and it is not hard to find better sources in this case).--SVTCobra 19:06, 29 May 2007 (UTC)