Talk:UN inspectors banned from North Korean nuclear facility

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Revision 699040 of this article has been reviewed by ShakataGaNai (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 05:27, 25 September 2008 (UTC).[reply]

  • Copyright: Passed
  • Newsworthiness: Passed
  • Verifiability: Passed
  • NPOV: Passed
  • Style: Not ready: Fix the last sentence. You mention the US twice and it is rather confusing. Did the US promise to take NKorea of the state sponsored terrorist list in exchange for them handing over the inventory? Counterparts did what?

Comments by reviewer: Sorry, I just don't under stand the last sentence enough to figure out what you mean - otherwise I'd fix it myself. --ShakataGaNai ^_^ 05:27, 25 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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Revision 699040 of this article has been reviewed by ShakataGaNai (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 05:27, 25 September 2008 (UTC).[reply]
  • Copyright: Passed
  • Newsworthiness: Passed
  • Verifiability: Passed
  • NPOV: Passed
  • Style: Not ready: Fix the last sentence. You mention the US twice and it is rather confusing. Did the US promise to take NKorea of the state sponsored terrorist list in exchange for them handing over the inventory? Counterparts did what?

Comments by reviewer: Sorry, I just don't under stand the last sentence enough to figure out what you mean - otherwise I'd fix it myself. --ShakataGaNai ^_^ 05:27, 25 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Questions about the above? Ask.

If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

review 2[edit]

Revision 699091 of this article has been reviewed by ShakataGaNai (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 05:58, 25 September 2008 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: Pois cleaned it up. --ShakataGaNai ^_^ 05:58, 25 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 699091 of this article has been reviewed by ShakataGaNai (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 05:58, 25 September 2008 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: Pois cleaned it up. --ShakataGaNai ^_^ 05:58, 25 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.
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