Talk:Utah police investigate polygamist family from reality show 'Sister Wives'
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Revision 1103798 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 19:41, 28 September 2010 (UTC).
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Revision 1103798 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 19:41, 28 September 2010 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: I note the source I removed was not actually needed, and so shouldn't have been there. I'm not convinced any info came from the third source, either. If you are going to describe perversities and complexities of a given jurisdiction, please understand that readers from outside the jurisdiction are unlikely to know of them. Therefore, please be prepared to explain such and supply sources to back the explanation up. Not a bad article. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |