Talk:Utah taser incident triggers debate and death threats

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Here's a source on the U.N. statement but that should really be a related news item. Not sure where the wikinews story on it went. Nyarlathotep 20:32, 28 November 2007 (UTC)

The first sentence doesn't make a lick of sense. What's he tasering? Who's refusing to sign? What does the freedom of info act have to do with it all? You're trying to cram too much information into one sentence and it is just not comprehensible. --216.75.93.104 11:40, 29 November 2007 (UTC)

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There seems to be factual inaccuracies as well as some clean-up needed. --SVTCobra 17:37, 29 November 2007 (UTC)

and a basic question in news is "when?" which is neither addressed for either the incident itself nor the release of the video. --SVTCobra 17:39, 29 November 2007 (UTC)

Typo[edit]

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The article says 'in awhile'. Either this quote is correct and [sic] should be added; or the quote is incorrect and it should be changed to 'in a while'. Van der Hoorn (talk) 16:16, 26 February 2009 (UTC)

Yes check.svg DoneGopher65talk 21:40, 12 March 2009 (UTC)