Talk:Voters in Maine and Maryland vote for marriage equality

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Reviewer notes[edit]

Is there a better way to write the lead to indicate these elections happened when? And not have three sentences? This appears a bit choppy, especially as all three sentences start with the same word. --LauraHale (talk) 09:57, 7 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

DoneTom Morris (talk) 10:00, 7 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Plagiarism check shows no cause for concerns. (Some source close issues after requested lead rewrite but fixed.) Sources added for missing quotes. No plagiarism concerns there. No concerns about neutrality. Obama wording is more clear now. Will pass in a second. --`LauraHale (talk) 10:20, 7 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Review of revision 1687428 [Passed][edit]