Talk:Voters in Maine and Maryland vote for marriage equality

Reviewer notes

Is there a better way to write the lead to indicate these elections happened when? And not have three sentences? This appears a bit choppy, especially as all three sentences start with the same word. --LauraHale (talk) 09:57, 7 November 2012 (UTC)

Done —Tom Morris (talk) 10:00, 7 November 2012 (UTC)

Plagiarism check shows no cause for concerns. (Some source close issues after requested lead rewrite but fixed.) Sources added for missing quotes. No plagiarism concerns there. No concerns about neutrality. Obama wording is more clear now. Will pass in a second. --`LauraHale (talk) 10:20, 7 November 2012 (UTC)

Review of revision 1687428 [Passed]

Revision 1687428 of this article has been reviewed by LauraHale (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 10:22, 7 November 2012 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Election stuff has no date but going with such a big huge story not needed. Written in active voice. Appears neutral. More reviewing comments on talk page. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1687428 of this article has been reviewed by LauraHale (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 10:22, 7 November 2012 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Election stuff has no date but going with such a big huge story not needed. Written in active voice. Appears neutral. More reviewing comments on talk page. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.