Talk:Warren Buffett to host world's most expensive lunch

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The title is not clear, when I read it I thought he was going to have a the most expensive food in the world for over 1,000 people or something similar. How about "Warren Buffett auctions lunch with himself" or something within the lines of that (sorry, bad with titles) Irunongamesplay 00:40, 17 June 2010 (UTC)Reply

Also, the title doesn't says where did it happen. Diego Grez return fire 00:57, 17 June 2010 (UTC)Reply

The fact the auction was for charity is only mentioned three paragraphs or fifty words in. I felt a bit disgusted before I found that out. Could it be moved further up? --92.27.28.81 (talk) 18:24, 18 June 2010 (UTC)Reply