Talk:Wikinews Interviews Australian wheelchair basketball player Georgia Inglis
Add topicGeorgia Inglis interview at 1300 on 26 November 2013 at the Thai-Japan Youth Center, Bangkok. Shortly before the Gliders' game against China. Information about the tournament can be found here.
Thoughts
[edit]Just some thoughts;
- Title doesn't mention the sport [Wheelchair basketball?].
- Is there any way to beef up the lede? --RockerballAustralia c 07:00, 27 November 2013 (UTC)
Review of revision 2189259 [Not ready]
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Revision 2189259 of this article has been reviewed by LauraHale (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 08:02, 27 November 2013 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: The article llede does not answer the all important when question. The journalists notes on the talk page provide only the audio interview with no supplemental information as to when this interview took place, where it took place, what happened to make this interview took place. Was the interview before or after a game? Which game? The issue of quality of notes and using notes for verifiability has been repeatedly addressed, so at this stage the community really expects improvement from the reporter on this front and on the front of style guide compliance. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Revision 2189259 of this article has been reviewed by LauraHale (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 08:02, 27 November 2013 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: The article llede does not answer the all important when question. The journalists notes on the talk page provide only the audio interview with no supplemental information as to when this interview took place, where it took place, what happened to make this interview took place. Was the interview before or after a game? Which game? The issue of quality of notes and using notes for verifiability has been repeatedly addressed, so at this stage the community really expects improvement from the reporter on this front and on the front of style guide compliance. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
- I've renamed the article, and expanded the lead with an explanation of where and when. Added a shot of my notes. Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:22, 27 November 2013 (UTC)
Review of revision 2192170 [Passed]
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Revision 2192170 of this article has been reviewed by RockerballAustralia (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 05:33, 28 November 2013 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Checks out as far as I tell. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 2192170 of this article has been reviewed by RockerballAustralia (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 05:33, 28 November 2013 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Checks out as far as I tell. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |