Talk:Wikinews Shorts: September 29, 2010

Review of revision 1104255 [Passed]

Revision 1104255 of this article has been reviewed by Bawolff (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 19:43, 29 September 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: I hope the copyedit I did on this article does not make me to involved to review (I don't think it does, but i did do quite a bit of editing, so I thought I should mention just in case). Anyways, article looks good, there was some grammar things I fixed, and one sentence that was too close to a source. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1104255 of this article has been reviewed by Bawolff (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 19:43, 29 September 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: I hope the copyedit I did on this article does not make me to involved to review (I don't think it does, but i did do quite a bit of editing, so I thought I should mention just in case). Anyways, article looks good, there was some grammar things I fixed, and one sentence that was too close to a source. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.