User talk:Bddpaux/Much of Texas plagued by weather problems

• Received a National Weather Service update document via e-mail (I fowarded the PDF to Scoop) about 10:40am local time on 5/21/2013.....some highlights included:
  • A map indicated Canton, Athen, Palestine, Fort Worth, Dallas, Corsican [and a few others] could see tornadoes.
  • Large hail likely with storm.--Bddpaux (talk)
• Notified by phone 5/21/2013 at 11:35am that Kindegarten graduation for East Texas Christian Academy (in Tyler)has been canceled due to severe weather predictions. --Bddpaux (talk) 14:12, 22 May 2013 (UTC)
• About 12:10pm local time 5/21/2012, listening to NWS radio broadcast: tornado watch in effect for Anderson, Henderson and Van Zandt counties 10:00am - 7:00pm --Bddpaux (talk) 14:26, 22 May 2013 (UTC)

• My observations while driving westward from Tyler, Texas to Chandler, Texas about 5:20pm - 5:45pm on 5/21/2013 were:
  • Severe winds, blowing debris onto streets.
  • Severe winds caused a huge tree limb to fall about 12 feet away from my car(!!!)
  • Very dark, cloudy skies....mostly north/west of Tyler. --Bddpaux (talk) 14:28, 22 May 2013 (UTC)
• 8:33am (local time) on 5/22/2013...heard via local radio news broadcast (93.1FM-Tyler) that about 3,000 homes over East Texas were still without electricity this AM. --Bddpaux (talk) 14:16, 22 May 2013 (UTC)

No matter how hard I try, this has actually gone stale........someone can publish/work on if they want.....but I think it's over now. --Bddpaux (talk) 16:52, 23 May 2013 (UTC)

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Revision 1906942 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 17:23, 23 May 2013 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not ready: Would be marginal at best. See below. Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: See below. Comments by reviewer: I've got lots of sympathy for the difficulty of scrounging time for Wikinews writing. Yeah, I see what you mean about effective staleness.  :-S The headline is overly generic. The first sentence of the lede has some of the same. The whole is really below minimal length for a standalone article. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.