Talk:46 illegal Afghan immigrants suffocate in truck in Pakistan
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Category:Balochistan (Pakistan) and Category:Quetta need to be added. Ali Rana (talk) 06:46, 6 August 2009 (UTC)
Done — [edit] Title
"46 suffocated Afghanistan victims return home" makes me think these people are now zombies. Could a less...awkward title be considered? --Resplendent (talk) 23:34, 7 April 2009 (UTC)
- Agreed, but this is a tricky one. The titles that the sources use also raise questions, but overall I think they are better. --SVTCobra 23:41, 7 April 2009 (UTC)
- I see what you mean about the zombies, not so good. Changed title above, if longer titles are ok, then it could still read...
- 46 illegal Afghan immigrants suffocate in truck in Pakistan; bodies returned home
- Bodies of 46 Afghan illegal immigrants returned home.
- Bodies returned home to Afghanistan after Pakistan container truck tragedy
- Bodies of Afghanistan illegal immigrants who tragically suffocated in Pakistan returned home.
SriMesh | talk 04:22, 8 April 2009 (UTC)
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{{editprotected}} Category:Quetta. Ali Rana (talk) 07:15, 1 October 2009 (UTC)
Done –Juliancolton | Talk 16:53, 2 October 2009 (UTC)
