Talk:Afghan provincial governor killed in mosque bomb attack

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Review of revision 1109627 [Failed] [edit]

Symbol question.svg Revision 1109627 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 02:10, 9 October 2010 (UTC).
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Comments by reviewer: The third paragraph may be somewhat POV, but that could be an illusion that would disappear with copyediting.

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Review of revision 1110145 [Passed] [edit]

Artículo bueno.svg Revision 1110145 of this article has been reviewed by Wackywace (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 12:26, 9 October 2010 (UTC).

Comments by reviewer: None added.

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