Talk:CFPB records fewer complaints in early days of US government shutdown

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Lede[edit]

The lede is rather long atm. One or two reasonable-lengthed sentences is best, with the first sentence (if there is even more than one) containing the most important info about the focus. --Pi zero (talk) 14:33, 8 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Changed a bit, added record low because I looked at the data and it is a record low because no single digits or periods of this low for four days. Chunked more info into second paragraph.--LauraHale (talk) 14:38, 8 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Journalist notes[edit]

File sent to scoop. Notes are also inline. Was curious as to what was happening. The sources do not explain why, but things are different. Speculation on my part is people do not know they are open or other ways of interacting ARE shut down. --LauraHale (talk) 14:35, 8 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Review of revision 2037557 [Passed][edit]