Talk:Coalition authorities report no casualties from missile strike on Iraqi air base

Review of revision 4527533 [Not ready]

Revision 4527533 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 20:54, 7 November 2019 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not ready: See below. Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: These protests are an ongoing protracted thing, and I'm pretty sure there's more than had happened as of the snapshot shown here, so that in fact this needs freshening. There isn't a crisp focus here. This is especially visible in the current headline, which presents no distinguishing features. Partly that's a macroscopic problem, in that the headline hasn't indicated anything that distinguishes the current ongoing protests from others that have occurred in Iraq over the years; but the headline also doesn't in any way distinguish what was happening early on Monday from what was happening last Friday, or mid-day on Wednesday, or whatever. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 4527533 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 20:54, 7 November 2019 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not ready: See below. Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: These protests are an ongoing protracted thing, and I'm pretty sure there's more than had happened as of the snapshot shown here, so that in fact this needs freshening. There isn't a crisp focus here. This is especially visible in the current headline, which presents no distinguishing features. Partly that's a macroscopic problem, in that the headline hasn't indicated anything that distinguishes the current ongoing protests from others that have occurred in Iraq over the years; but the headline also doesn't in any way distinguish what was happening early on Monday from what was happening last Friday, or mid-day on Wednesday, or whatever. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 4527922 [Passed]

Revision 4527922 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 18:15, 10 November 2019 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: There were a couple of long passages verbatim from source; there's no reason that should happen. I recommend practice in complete structural rephrasings. (Yes there were other things; see the detailed history of edits during review, as always.) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4527922 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 18:15, 10 November 2019 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: There were a couple of long passages verbatim from source; there's no reason that should happen. I recommend practice in complete structural rephrasings. (Yes there were other things; see the detailed history of edits during review, as always.) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.