Talk:Crown Prince Sultan of Saudi Arabia dies

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Review of revision 1307448 [Not ready] [edit]

Symbol question.svg Revision 1307448 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 05:31, 23 October 2011 (UTC).

Comments by reviewer:

  • I already cleaned up the unsupported claim of a precise age of death (the precise age was changed by an IP, but the sources don't give any precise age).
  • I also removed the claim that he'd been in New York for treatment since 2009, because I didn't find either source saying when he started treatment there.
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  • I also didn't find any mention that he was First Deputy Prime Minister. Both sources said Nayef was the second, but they don't say Sultan was the first.
  • As I understand the sources, Nayef is not the next in line and therefore automatically the new crown prince. Apparently there is no fixed succession, and there's a council to officially decide who becomes crown prince; Nayef is merely who people think will be named. That uncertainty appears to be a pretty significant fact about the situation.

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Review of revision 1307710 [Passed] [edit]

Artículo bueno.svg Revision 1307710 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 14:05, 23 October 2011 (UTC).

Comments by reviewer:

  • Hopefully, in future we can avoid this confusion over sources. Choose acceptable sources before beginning to write, list them all, and don't include anything not verified by them.
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