Talk:Daniel Carasso, name-giver and leader of Danone, dies at 103
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[edit] Minimal
This story is currently at an absolute minimum. It might even qualify to be marked with {{minimal}}. Isn't there any more info that could be added (like quotes, more biography history)? Otherwise perhaps it could be moved to Wikinews Shorts: May 19, 2009. Just a thought. Tempodivalse [talk] 14:59, 19 May 2009 (UTC)
- Expanded a bit. --Yuriybrisk (talk) 19:06, 19 May 2009 (UTC)
- That's better! Thanks.
Tempodivalse [talk] 19:37, 19 May 2009 (UTC)
- That's better! Thanks.
[edit] Review revision 821270
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Revision 821270 of this article has been reviewed by SVTCobra (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 00:49, 20 May 2009 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: A business obituary. --SVTCobra 00:49, 20 May 2009 (UTC) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
[edit] Title
I gave it a new title since the first one was actually false. It is a bit cumbersome and could be improved. --SVTCobra 00:57, 20 May 2009 (UTC)
