Talk:Former Australian athlete jailed for eighteen years for murdering her baby
Review of revision 1215487 [Failed][edit]
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Revision 1215487 of this article has been reviewed by Tempodivalse (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 23:59, 16 April 2011 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Portions of article uncomfortably close to sources. I haven't checked the whole piece, but there are already clear instances of copyright violation. "the community does not accept a child being killed by its mother" and "for information leading to the whereabouts of Tegan or Andrew", are identical, for instance. Please rework everything in your own words as much as possible. You may wish to also read our copyright policy. Tempodivalse [talk] 23:59, 16 April 2011 (UTC) Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Revision 1215487 of this article has been reviewed by Tempodivalse (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 23:59, 16 April 2011 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Portions of article uncomfortably close to sources. I haven't checked the whole piece, but there are already clear instances of copyright violation. "the community does not accept a child being killed by its mother" and "for information leading to the whereabouts of Tegan or Andrew", are identical, for instance. Please rework everything in your own words as much as possible. You may wish to also read our copyright policy. Tempodivalse [talk] 23:59, 16 April 2011 (UTC) Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
The sources are conflicting on some matters[edit]
However, I don't think that the conflicting information is integral to the article's overall thrust. Mattisse (talk) 02:37, 17 April 2011 (UTC)
Review of revision 1215800 [Passed][edit]
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Revision 1215800 of this article has been reviewed by Dendodge (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 11:30, 17 April 2011 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: I couldn't find anything to support "he said the taking the life of a completely defenceless baby was an abuse of a position of trust" in the sources, so I removed it and reworded the surrounding text slightly for flow. If I missed it, just point out where it appears in the sources and I'll put it back :-) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 1215800 of this article has been reviewed by Dendodge (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 11:30, 17 April 2011 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: I couldn't find anything to support "he said the taking the life of a completely defenceless baby was an abuse of a position of trust" in the sources, so I removed it and reworded the surrounding text slightly for flow. If I missed it, just point out where it appears in the sources and I'll put it back :-) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |