Talk:Former U.S. Senator Norm Coleman diagnosed with Bell's palsy
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A full interview is supposed to be released on Sunday, Sept. 13, the launch date of the site. Calebrw (talk) 02:58, 11 September 2009 (UTC)
[edit] One line paragraphs?
Can any of the sentences be merged together? 75.72.27.74 (talk) (→Zachary) 04:15, 11 September 2009 (UTC)
[edit] Review of revision 880624 [Failed]
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Revision 880624 of this article has been reviewed by Cirt (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 21:34, 11 September 2009 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Way too much use of dashes in sentences - which makes for awkward wording - but only if you have trouble pausing - way too much - in the middle of reading - the article. Last sentence of first paragraph begins with "And...". If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Thanks for the comments Cirt. I'll do what I can to fix the problems. I'll see if I can't find a second source, but this was an exclusive, but has most likely been picked up on other local media outlets. Calebrw (talk) 23:27, 11 September 2009 (UTC)
- Think I got it fixed up nicely. Removed some em dashes and added a second source. Calebrw (talk) 23:40, 11 September 2009 (UTC)
[edit] Review of revision 880946 [Passed]
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Revision 880946 of this article has been reviewed by Cirt (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 06:26, 12 September 2009 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: I did some minor copyediting and formatting. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
