Talk:Japan bans possession of child pornography

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Review of revision 2698294 [Passed][edit]

Revision 2698294 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 14:03, 19 June 2014 (UTC).[reply]

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  • There was some tendency here to provide analysis rather than simply presenting facts. In one case a passage was biased toward a particular political position. There were also more superficial style problems (such as, for example, external links in the body of the article), the sort of thing that's clearly spelled out in the style guide; our style guide is deliberately kept short so it's feasible to read in full. And, of course, some other miscellaneous problems; see the detailed history of edits during review.

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Revision 2698294 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 14:03, 19 June 2014 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • There was some tendency here to provide analysis rather than simply presenting facts. In one case a passage was biased toward a particular political position. There were also more superficial style problems (such as, for example, external links in the body of the article), the sort of thing that's clearly spelled out in the style guide; our style guide is deliberately kept short so it's feasible to read in full. And, of course, some other miscellaneous problems; see the detailed history of edits during review.
The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

add Cat.[edit]

{{editprotected}} can u plz add the (Category:Children) to the article .عماد الدين المقدسي (talk) 09:25, 1 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Not done Wikinews does not have that category. --SVTCobra 23:26, 7 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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