Talk:Macaque kills newborn in Malaysia

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Review of revision 1109205 [Failed] [edit]

Symbol question.svg Revision 1109205 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 03:31, 8 October 2010 (UTC).
  • Copyright: Artículo bueno.svg Passed
  • Newsworthiness: Artículo bueno.svg Passed
  • Verifiability: Symbol question.svg Not ready: BBC says the child died en route to hospital; only the quote from Muhamad somewhat ambiguously suggests instant death from the fall. The infanticide thing, I didn't find in either source.
  • NPOV: Artículo bueno.svg Passed
  • Style: Symbol abstain vote.svg Not reviewed. Please address other issues.

Comments by reviewer: For article length, there should be some sort of story background where the problematic infanticide paragraph now is. The cited sources mention various macaque behaviors with bearing on the story (breeding, urban areas, entering homes).

The first and second sources are not separate from each other. The BBC is different, though, which satisfies the two-source requirement.

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Review of revision 1109946 [Passed] [edit]

Artículo bueno.svg Revision 1109946 of this article has been reviewed by Cirt (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 05:42, 9 October 2010 (UTC).

Comments by reviewer: Good fixes, done by the first reviewer. Thank you. :)

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