Talk:Snowmobiler Caleb Moore dies from injuries sustained during the Winter X Games XVII
Headline[edit]
The headline sounds oddly POV. --Pi zero (talk) 01:05, 1 February 2013 (UTC)
Rename to any of these:
- Caleb Moore dies week after crashing in X Games
- X Games mourn first athlete dead after crashing during competition
- X Games promises review of safety after snowmobile race death
- Caleb Moore dies from injuries sustained in X Games
BirchTreeMountain (talk) 02:50, 1 February 2013 (UTC)
Starting review[edit]
Changed title as I agreed: It appeared inherently POV and suggested that the event organisers were at fault without enough supporting detail for that apparent opinion. I also did some minor wording changes.
I really would have liked a picture but stuck an infobox in as none was included.
Did a plagiarism check. No problems.--LauraHale (talk) 09:26, 2 February 2013 (UTC)
I believe the article is neutral and the article is fully supported by sources. --LauraHale (talk) 09:30, 2 February 2013 (UTC)
Review of revision 1794711 [Passed][edit]
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Comments by reviewer: These things are addressed on the talk page. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Category and link[edit]
{{edit protected}} Please add this article to Category:ESPN, and localize the link of the same name. Thank you. Green Giant (talk) 16:18, 27 October 2015 (UTC)
- Done --Pi zero (talk) 16:47, 27 October 2015 (UTC)