Talk:Study suggests 'sleeping sickness' parasite mutated to evade immune system defences

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96.229.149.8 (talk) 18:47, 2 September 2010 (UTC)AC - In the second paragraph, in the sentence "The parasites are spread by tsetse flies, which are more or less difficult to eradicate at the territory" - the section "which are more or less difficult to eradicate at the territory" fails to communicate whatever was intended to be communicated by this phrase. Can whoever wrote this please edit or rewrite for clarity.

Single source

The "two" sources appear to be word-for-word identical. --Pi zero (talk) 20:46, 2 September 2010 (UTC)

I think the external link can be used as a source. I just checked with one of the sources, sorry. Diego Grez ^{return fire} 00:30, 3 September 2010 (UTC)