Talk:Tankers taken by pirates in Indian Ocean
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Review of revision 1177445 [Failed] [edit]
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Revision 1177445 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 19:26, 10 February 2011 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: WN:SG#The first paragraph gives a general overview of what the lede should do. In particular: "The first paragraph (known as the intro or lede) should summarise the article in... one to three sentences," and "Every fact or issue mentioned in the first paragraph should be later backed up or expanded in the main body of the article." In other words, a consolidated quick-read of the story, with all the details coming later. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Review of revision 1177838 [Passed] [edit]
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Revision 1177838 of this article has been reviewed by Diego Grez (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 01:08, 11 February 2011 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Cada minuto debes gozarlo! :) — You must enjoy every minute. (Not related to the article. The article is okay) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
