Talk:Toowoomba, Brisbane City take out Roller Derby wins on Australia's Sunshine Coast

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Coastal Assassins teams as per here and here --RockerballAustralia c 05:48, 17 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Video[edit]

I put place-holders for the video. Don't put in unrelated, please. --SVTCobra 01:45, 20 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Original reporting notes[edit]

Emails, Phone call transcripts, other written evidence[edit]

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Interview details[edit]

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On-the-spot notes[edit]

  • Coastal Assassins Roller Derby fielded two teams, the Ace Invades and the Blood Diamonds.
  • Arrived at Caloundra Indoor Stadium ast about 1645 local time (UTC +10)
  • First match started at about 1715 local time.
  • Both games two halves of 30 minutes with about a 15 minute half time
  • About half hour between games
  • Scores
    • Ace Invaders 90 vs/ Toowoomba Range Renegades 263
    • Blood Diamonds 127 vs/ Brisbane City Rollers Punk Blockers 215

Details from broadcast report[edit]

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Information shared privately for off-wiki confirmation[edit]

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Confirmation of email receipt by accredited reporter[edit]

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--RockerballAustralia c

Headline[edit]

Should be a sentence. --Pi zero (talk) 19:56, 23 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Review of revision 1933973 [Passed][edit]

Revision 1933973 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 17:44, 24 June 2013 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • The start time of the second match puzzled me. The notes said the first match started at 5:15, length should be about 1:15, half an hour between games, which ought to have the second game starting at 7:00, yet the timestamps on the pictures for the second game are none of them before 8:00 and at least one after 9:00. The numbers don't add up nohow, afaics. I hedged a little with "around" (which is in the notes for the first time, after all), and note that the substance of the article is already pretty thin (pushing minimal length of a text article; this sort-of hovers between text article and photo essay, doesn't it).

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1933973 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 17:44, 24 June 2013 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • The start time of the second match puzzled me. The notes said the first match started at 5:15, length should be about 1:15, half an hour between games, which ought to have the second game starting at 7:00, yet the timestamps on the pictures for the second game are none of them before 8:00 and at least one after 9:00. The numbers don't add up nohow, afaics. I hedged a little with "around" (which is in the notes for the first time, after all), and note that the substance of the article is already pretty thin (pushing minimal length of a text article; this sort-of hovers between text article and photo essay, doesn't it).
The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.
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