User talk:Dominika uow/Russian Far East inundated by record flooding

Review of revision 1973262 [Not ready]

Revision 1973262 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 04:31, 20 August 2013 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not ready: See below. Style: Not ready: See below. Comments by reviewer: The lede should briefly summarize the focal event, by succinctly answering as many as reasonably possible of the basic questions about it. Here, the first paragraph is long and contains details. The length and level of detail could be addressed by simply inserting a paragraph break after the first sentence, but then the first sentence would describe a claim that isn't suggested by the headline, and should not be presented as fact but should instead be attributed. Where does the 100,000 figure come from? Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1973262 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 04:31, 20 August 2013 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not ready: See below. Style: Not ready: See below. Comments by reviewer: The lede should briefly summarize the focal event, by succinctly answering as many as reasonably possible of the basic questions about it. Here, the first paragraph is long and contains details. The length and level of detail could be addressed by simply inserting a paragraph break after the first sentence, but then the first sentence would describe a claim that isn't suggested by the headline, and should not be presented as fact but should instead be attributed. Where does the 100,000 figure come from? Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 1973270 [Not ready]

Revision 1973270 of this article has been reviewed by LauraHale (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 07:46, 20 August 2013 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: Comments by reviewer: Revealed to whom? Suggested by whom? Why are we linking to Russian but not Far Ear? Would you link only Australia when referring to Western Australia? Or only Australia when referring to South Australia? If we are not talking about the territory, then the capitalization needs to be changed. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1973270 of this article has been reviewed by LauraHale (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 07:46, 20 August 2013 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: Comments by reviewer: Revealed to whom? Suggested by whom? Why are we linking to Russian but not Far Ear? Would you link only Australia when referring to Western Australia? Or only Australia when referring to South Australia? If we are not talking about the territory, then the capitalization needs to be changed. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 1973499 [Not ready]

Revision 1973499 of this article has been reviewed by RockerballAustralia (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 23:07, 22 August 2013 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not ready: Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: This article seems to have gone stale waiting for review. I suggest moving this to a user subpage for use in any future article. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1973499 of this article has been reviewed by RockerballAustralia (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 23:07, 22 August 2013 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not ready: Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: This article seems to have gone stale waiting for review. I suggest moving this to a user subpage for use in any future article. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.