Wikinews talk:Briefs/February 20, 2014

Comments on script pre-review

• Two dead in storms with no sign of floods letting up in Britain

Although the Met Office said things would return to normal, the Environment Agency said otherwise. The script as submitted mentioned the one forecast but not the other. I commented out the Met Office forecast in the script; if both were to be mentioned, expensive in seconds of recording time, it certainly wouldn't be within my purview as reviewer.

• The Jade Rabbit story is more than a week old; and the Piers Morgan story is oddly missing.
• Otherwise, things look okay.

--Pi zero (talk) 15:33, 20 February 2014 (UTC)

Review of revision 2416470 [Passed]

Revision 2416470 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 20:42, 21 February 2014 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: A few notes, though nothing to justify not-ready'ing given the audio is already recorded (a medium that doesn't lend itself to casual copyedits). The name of the paper is "Maariv" rather than "The Maariv", afaics. Honestly, I wouldn't have characterized the phone hacking investigation quite that way. The Jade Rabbit story is out of chronological order. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 2416470 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 20:42, 21 February 2014 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: A few notes, though nothing to justify not-ready'ing given the audio is already recorded (a medium that doesn't lend itself to casual copyedits). The name of the paper is "Maariv" rather than "The Maariv", afaics. Honestly, I wouldn't have characterized the phone hacking investigation quite that way. The Jade Rabbit story is out of chronological order. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

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Done --Pi zero (talk) 00:09, 10 April 2014 (UTC)