Talk:'Criminal in a police uniform' given eleven years jail for role in English drugs gang

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As you might expect, some details are sourced from the old article and indeed some text is lifted directly from it. Blood Red Sandman (Talk) (Contribs) 21:15, 16 November 2010 (UTC)

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  • From the Guardian: "Razaq had joined the Lancashire force nine years ago, becoming a sergeant after serving as a traffic officer in the motorway patrol." I also consider the lines "...to obtain information about his family and acquaintances. Officers became suspicious and..." to back that one up. Let me reword the hijacking. Blood Red Sandman (Talk) (Contribs) 07:40, 18 November 2010 (UTC)
I agree with Pi zero about the interpretation of Salim's bio. It is likely, from what little I know of police careers, that Salim was first a cadet then some kind of beat officer before joining traffic division / Motorway Unit. The Guardian sentence isn't conclusive one way or the other, and the early part of his career (before traffic and sergeant) is unimportant to the story. I reworded. --InfantGorilla (talk) 09:43, 18 November 2010 (UTC)

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