Talk:11-month old baby finds illegal drugs in playground in British Columbia, Canadian police report

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I'm aware there was an extensive discussion on irc, though it's somewhat unclear to me what was resolved there.

  • The headline should be a sentence, rather than a noun phrase (as currently).
  • It should focus on the focal event of the article.
  • It should "tell the most important and unique thing". It's important to know where in the world this happened.

--Pi zero (talk) 13:54, 8 July 2020 (UTC)Reply[reply]

I'm inclined to "11-month old baby finds illegal drugs in playground, British Columbia police reports", which is a just-slightly-tightened-up form (per headlinese) of one of the candidates tossed about the in the irc discussion. Analysis of the big-picture situation does not appear to be part of the focal event. --Pi zero (talk) 15:33, 8 July 2020 (UTC)Reply[reply]
It's been noted (off-wiki) the headline really ought to have the country name in it. --Pi zero (talk) 17:37, 8 July 2020 (UTC)Reply[reply]

Review of revision 4573893 [Passed][edit]