Talk:16-year-old girl charged with attempted murder in Melbourne, Australia
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Revision 3578571 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 11:57, 10 June 2015 (UTC).
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Revision 3578571 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 11:57, 10 June 2015 (UTC).
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Hi Pizero,
Thank you for reviewing the article.
I have fixed everything that you suggested but I am struggling with the length of the article. As it was only a short story and there isn't a lot of information I could only make it 2-3 sentences longer.
Kind regards, Michelle
̜ Uowmlb (talk) 22:58, 10 June 2015 (UTC)
- The length looks much better now. --Pi zero (talk) 23:14, 10 June 2015 (UTC)
Review of revision 3581423 [Passed]
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Revision 3581423 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 12:57, 11 June 2015 (UTC).
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Revision 3581423 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 12:57, 11 June 2015 (UTC).
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The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |