Talk:2009 Shri Shyam Bhajan Hindu religious festival held in Hyderabad

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Notes about Original Reporting[edit]

I attended the program. I am also uploading the pictures on 2009 Shri Shyam Bhajan Amritvarsha Hyderabad as well. Shyam (T/C) 11:51, 16 August 2009 (UTC)

Sources[edit]

Not a single source found for such a big event. Please consider before publishing.--110.37.17.194 (talk) 13:57, 16 August 2009 (UTC)

Review Nr. 1[edit]

I have changed the article in past tense. Most of the terminologies have been explained. I am not sure about the punctuations, which can be improved. If someone could let me know or improve them himself/herself, would be much-appreciated. Thanks for review, Shyam (T/C) 06:00, 17 August 2009 (UTC)
I've reworked the article a bit for extra clarity and corrected punctuation where necessary. It looks good now, but I'll have to let someone else review it as I think I no longer qualify as an uninvolved editor and thus can't review it myself (see WN:REVIEW). Tempodivalse [talk] 18:54, 17 August 2009 (UTC)

Review 2[edit]