Talk:2014 Australian Grand Prix: Hamilton takes pole

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Review of revision 2471894 [Not ready][edit]

Revision 2471894 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 11:45, 15 March 2014 (UTC).[reply]

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Comments by reviewer:

  • This lede is somewhat opaque for a general international reader. Someone did something, but it's not necessarily clear to the reader what sport is involved or what the person did.
  • This falls slightly belong minimal length for a standalone article. Another few sentences would be good.

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Revision 2471894 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 11:45, 15 March 2014 (UTC).[reply]
  • Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Style: Not ready: See below.

Comments by reviewer:

  • This lede is somewhat opaque for a general international reader. Someone did something, but it's not necessarily clear to the reader what sport is involved or what the person did.
  • This falls slightly belong minimal length for a standalone article. Another few sentences would be good.

Questions about the above? Ask.

If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 2473252 [Passed][edit]

Revision 2473252 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 20:29, 15 March 2014 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • Just makes it on length, I'd say.

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 2473252 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 20:29, 15 March 2014 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • Just makes it on length, I'd say.
The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.
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