Talk:20 confirmed dead after Kintampo freak tree accident

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Revision 4297477 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 16:40, 21 March 2017 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: I almost not-ready'd this for similarities to source. Do not use a synthesis-writing technique that starts with a source passage and modifies it. See advice at WN:PILLARS#own and discussion at WN:Plagiarism. More attribution was needed. The day of the event was not specified in the lede; note the advice on "when" at WN:Five Ws and an H. This is quite short; a reviewer might reasonably have judged this below minimal length. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4297477 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 16:40, 21 March 2017 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: I almost not-ready'd this for similarities to source. Do not use a synthesis-writing technique that starts with a source passage and modifies it. See advice at WN:PILLARS#own and discussion at WN:Plagiarism. More attribution was needed. The day of the event was not specified in the lede; note the advice on "when" at WN:Five Ws and an H. This is quite short; a reviewer might reasonably have judged this below minimal length. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.