Talk:Afghanistan women protest Shia Family Law

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Review[edit]

Re NPOV[edit]

This article has quotations from both the women protestors and Shia clergy, so it does show both sides of the Shia Family Law and both the protestor's and the counterdemonstrator's quotes fairly evenly back and forth. Most of what is stated which is of an opinion is actually a quotation by someone and not by me.03:21, 19 April 2009 (UTC)

My problem with the title is that equates a group of 100 to 200 to all Afghan women. There is really nothing to demonstrate that all or even a majority of women are protesting the "Family Law". Note that I didn't protest against the body of the article. --SVTCobra 00:18, 21 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

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