Talk:Afghanistan women protest Shia Family Law

Review

Revision 805763 of this article has been reviewed by SVTCobra (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 01:40, 18 April 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Not ready: Gross violation in title, perhaps elsewhere Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Blatant POV in title. --SVTCobra 01:40, 18 April 2009 (UTC) Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 805763 of this article has been reviewed by SVTCobra (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 01:40, 18 April 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Not ready: Gross violation in title, perhaps elsewhere Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Blatant POV in title. --SVTCobra 01:40, 18 April 2009 (UTC) Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Re NPOV

This article has quotations from both the women protestors and Shia clergy, so it does show both sides of the Shia Family Law and both the protestor's and the counterdemonstrator's quotes fairly evenly back and forth. Most of what is stated which is of an opinion is actually a quotation by someone and not by me.03:21, 19 April 2009 (UTC)

My problem with the title is that equates a group of 100 to 200 to all Afghan women. There is really nothing to demonstrate that all or even a majority of women are protesting the "Family Law". Note that I didn't protest against the body of the article. --SVTCobra 00:18, 21 April 2009 (UTC)

Review #2

Revision 806751 of this article has been reviewed by Killing Vector (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 16:02, 19 April 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 806751 of this article has been reviewed by Killing Vector (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 16:02, 19 April 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.