Talk:Anti-abortion activist Bernard Nathanson dies aged 84

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Sources[edit]

Why does this not have any sources? --Ashershow1talk 01:50, 23 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Review of revision 1183694 [Passed][edit]

Revision 1183694 of this article has been reviewed by DragonFire1024 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 03:57, 23 February 2011 (UTC).[reply]

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Revision 1183694 of this article has been reviewed by DragonFire1024 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 03:57, 23 February 2011 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: None added.

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

This article has weaselly wording: "During his time as an obstetrician it is believed that he was involved in nearly 75,000 abortions". This evasive wording is unnecessary as the source states that he estimated this number. Mattisse (talk) 15:59, 23 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I fixed the weaselly wording I complained about above and made other small copy edits. I was surprised that it "passed" for publication with such poor writing.

This article implies that he died on February 23. It does not state that he died on February 21. Mattisse (talk) 16:44, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Although I'm not sure I agree it implies the 23rd, I wholehearted agree it's atrocious that the when basic question wasn't answered by the lede. It's one of the easiest of the questions to answer, and omitting it is a nasty habit that should be rooted out at Wikinews. --Pi zero (talk) 17:41, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Edit request[edit]

{{editprotected}} Please all Category:Conservatism

Thanks! Lionelt (talk) 10:08, 27 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Not done as the category has been deleted. — μchip08 10:53, 5 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]
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