Talk:Arsenal signs Mönchengladbach captain Granit Xhaka

Review of revision 4218044 [Not ready]

Revision 4218044 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 13:00, 25 May 2016 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not ready: See below. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: See below. Comments by reviewer: We need at least two mutually independent trust-worthy sources corroborating the focal event; and we strongly recommend reading all of these sources before starting to write. We need them to be cited with working, specific links to the source articles so that a reviewer can intensively study them during review. There should be a lede and at least two paragraphs after that following an inverted pyramid. The total length of the body should also be a bit longer than the current text. There's a good tutorial on writing an article at WN:WRITE. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 4218044 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 13:00, 25 May 2016 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not ready: See below. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: See below. Comments by reviewer: We need at least two mutually independent trust-worthy sources corroborating the focal event; and we strongly recommend reading all of these sources before starting to write. We need them to be cited with working, specific links to the source articles so that a reviewer can intensively study them during review. There should be a lede and at least two paragraphs after that following an inverted pyramid. The total length of the body should also be a bit longer than the current text. There's a good tutorial on writing an article at WN:WRITE. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 4218078 [Not ready]

Revision 4218078 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 14:44, 25 May 2016 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not ready: See below. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: Something's gone wrong with the url on the second source. It gives me an error message (in both the German and English versions). On reflection, it's probably a good idea, in general, to try to get some secondary sources, simply because it's clearly possible there could be significant aspects to a deal like this that neither team would care to mention. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 4218078 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 14:44, 25 May 2016 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not ready: See below. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: Something's gone wrong with the url on the second source. It gives me an error message (in both the German and English versions). On reflection, it's probably a good idea, in general, to try to get some secondary sources, simply because it's clearly possible there could be significant aspects to a deal like this that neither team would care to mention. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 4218172 [Passed]

Revision 4218172 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 19:08, 25 May 2016 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4218172 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 19:08, 25 May 2016 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.