Talk:Arthur Ochs Sulzberger, former publisher of The New York Times, dies aged 86

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Clearly some copyediting will be needed here; whether it's within range for an independent review is harder to say without closer scrutiny. Some points that catch the eye:

  • According to his family Sulzberger had a long illness.
One wonders when this illness was, in relation to his death.
  • Sulzberger left the chief executive position and succeeded to his son
Um. wikt:succeed.
  • United States President Barack Obama said, "he was saddened by news of Sulzberger's death."
This begs the question of who Obama was referring to when Obama said "he".
  • An assistant managing editor for the New York Times, Jim Roberts said that the publisher's death is a "monumental contributor to journalism."
Say what?

--Pi zero (talk) 02:52, 1 October 2012 (UTC)Reply

Review of revision 1645467 [Passed]