Talk:Athletes prepare for 2012 Summer Paralympics at the Paralympic Fitness Centre

Focus

Atm, the headline is a noun phrase, and the lede is encyclopedic, describing a thing, rather than summarizing a focal news event by succinctly answering as many as reasonably possible of the basic questions about it. --Pi zero (talk) 19:08, 26 August 2012 (UTC)

Journalist notes

Hawkeye7 wrote this story when he went on the tour himself. Dropbox is failing me and did not have time to get to press centre to upload and not payng 20 pounds a day for it. Frustrating. :( --LauraHale (talk) 20:32, 26 August 2012 (UTC)

I suspect this is not ready but I can see the files in drop box and they are not transitting over. :( Blech. All I wanted to do was replace the image with one of those. In any case, that is done is done. I think I fixed the lead, but erk. : / Mostly Hawkeye7 article so I kind of don't want to tweak too much and would prefer he get feedback. I also would like one of the images he took. :(--LauraHale (talk) 20:55, 26 August 2012 (UTC)

Unfortunately the difficulties surrounding the dropbox on this one have only deepened. --Pi zero (talk) 22:04, 26 August 2012 (UTC)

It looks as if the difficulties with the dropbox and bot have been resolved; can we confirm that, and establish links from this page to all relevant journalist notes? --Pi zero (talk) 23:13, 26 August 2012 (UTC)

There you go. This should now be resolved. I apologise for the tense stuff on my part. I uploaded them to the folder I thought I did. (I am 99% certain.) And it gets aggravating. :) In any case, this also draws upon the notes sent to the journalist workspace to confirm the Paralympic village tour. --LauraHale (talk) 05:07, 27 August 2012 (UTC)

Er. I'm guessing the other notes you're referring to might be the "Media tour guide sheet", which was emailed to scoop. I hope to proceed on that premise. The more specific you can be about identifying these various documents, the better, as there's a lot of stuff being emailed and uploaded, and most of the uploaded stuff uses pretty generic filenames. --Pi zero (talk) 14:53, 27 August 2012 (UTC)

Review of revision 1599564 [Not ready]

Revision 1599564 of this article has been reviewed by Bddpaux (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 23:56, 26 August 2012 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: Notes? NPOV: Passed Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: I know we've had Dropbox issues, but all that aside, I don't see any applicable notes on the Talk page that I can use. I'll need to see some evidence of such in order to ready this. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1599564 of this article has been reviewed by Bddpaux (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 23:56, 26 August 2012 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: Notes? NPOV: Passed Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: I know we've had Dropbox issues, but all that aside, I don't see any applicable notes on the Talk page that I can use. I'll need to see some evidence of such in order to ready this. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 1600255 [Passed]

Revision 1600255 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 15:23, 27 August 2012 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: The point about a single large room in Beijing is a detail not explicit in the notes; however, it's a straightforward detail the reporter would be reminded of by the notes, not involving complex detail that could be easily misremembered (like, say, a number). So I'm allowing it (I did consider excising the words "as in Beijing"). The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1600255 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 15:23, 27 August 2012 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: The point about a single large room in Beijing is a detail not explicit in the notes; however, it's a straightforward detail the reporter would be reminded of by the notes, not involving complex detail that could be easily misremembered (like, say, a number). So I'm allowing it (I did consider excising the words "as in Beijing"). The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.