Talk:Athletes prepare for 2012 Summer Paralympics at the Paralympic Fitness Centre

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Focus[edit]

Atm, the headline is a noun phrase, and the lede is encyclopedic, describing a thing, rather than summarizing a focal news event by succinctly answering as many as reasonably possible of the basic questions about it. --Pi zero (talk) 19:08, 26 August 2012 (UTC)

Journalist notes[edit]

Hawkeye7 wrote this story when he went on the tour himself. Dropbox is failing me and did not have time to get to press centre to upload and not payng 20 pounds a day for it. Frustrating. :( --LauraHale (talk) 20:32, 26 August 2012 (UTC)

I suspect this is not ready but I can see the files in drop box and they are not transitting over. :( Blech. All I wanted to do was replace the image with one of those. In any case, that is done is done. I think I fixed the lead, but erk. : / Mostly Hawkeye7 article so I kind of don't want to tweak too much and would prefer he get feedback. I also would like one of the images he took. :(--LauraHale (talk) 20:55, 26 August 2012 (UTC)
Unfortunately the difficulties surrounding the dropbox on this one have only deepened. --Pi zero (talk) 22:04, 26 August 2012 (UTC)
It looks as if the difficulties with the dropbox and bot have been resolved; can we confirm that, and establish links from this page to all relevant journalist notes? --Pi zero (talk) 23:13, 26 August 2012 (UTC)

2012-08-26 hawkeye7 notes gym.pdf

There you go. This should now be resolved. I apologise for the tense stuff on my part. I uploaded them to the folder I thought I did. (I am 99% certain.) And it gets aggravating. :) In any case, this also draws upon the notes sent to the journalist workspace to confirm the Paralympic village tour. --LauraHale (talk) 05:07, 27 August 2012 (UTC)

Er. I'm guessing the other notes you're referring to might be the "Media tour guide sheet", which was emailed to scoop. I hope to proceed on that premise. The more specific you can be about identifying these various documents, the better, as there's a lot of stuff being emailed and uploaded, and most of the uploaded stuff uses pretty generic filenames. --Pi zero (talk) 14:53, 27 August 2012 (UTC)

Review of revision 1599564 [Not ready][edit]

Review of revision 1600255 [Passed][edit]