Talk:Attack at Texas elementary school kills at least 19, including 18 children
Add topicPlease help add photographs of this terrible, terrible tragedy. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Adam8410 (talk • contribs)
Review of revision 4678291 [Not ready]
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Revision 4678291 of this article has been reviewed by LivelyRatification (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 00:47, 25 May 2022 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: @Adam8410: I appreciate your efforts with this article, and would like to get it published as quick as possible, however I believe that the fatalities have been updated by authorities, with 18 (I believe) now said to have been killed. Please update the article to reflect this new information and submit it for review at your earliest convenience. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Revision 4678291 of this article has been reviewed by LivelyRatification (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 00:47, 25 May 2022 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: @Adam8410: I appreciate your efforts with this article, and would like to get it published as quick as possible, however I believe that the fatalities have been updated by authorities, with 18 (I believe) now said to have been killed. Please update the article to reflect this new information and submit it for review at your earliest convenience. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
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[edit]Thank you very much, I'm still new to Wikinews and newswriting in general. I appreciate your help. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Adam8410 (talk • contribs)
- @Adam8410: No problem. I'm just having a look through the sources now and while there's some conflicting information, it seems at least 2 adults as well as 18 children have been killed. NPR says 2 adults, AP says 3 adults although unclear whether that number includes the attacker. Could you add that into the article? (Also, please do sign your talk page comments with ~~~~, which adds a signature with the time your message was sent and your username.) --LivelyRatification (talk) 01:27, 25 May 2022 (UTC)
- @LivelyRatification: Alright, I tried to update the article accordingly to reflect the current ambiguity in today's reports. I hope this is adequate Adam8410 (talk) 01:35, 25 May 2022 (UTC)
Review of revision 4678329 [Passed]
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Revision 4678329 of this article has been reviewed by LivelyRatification (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 02:01, 25 May 2022 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Some minor edits were made for style and to remove information that couldn't be verified, but overall a good article on a tragic event. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 4678329 of this article has been reviewed by LivelyRatification (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 02:01, 25 May 2022 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Some minor edits were made for style and to remove information that couldn't be verified, but overall a good article on a tragic event. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
I want to go on the record that there is so much ambiguity in what happened that it should have been held 24 hours at least. It is a very real possibility that there will need to be a retraction. AZOperator (talk) 03:43, 25 May 2022 (UTC)