Talk:Australian–US team of scientists finds Atlantic warming causes Pacific climate trends

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  • Stylistically, this lede is also weak in that it really should be much shorter. For instance, when I made it a lead on the main page, my summary sentence read
A team of scientists from Australia and US has found an explanation for why increasing greenhouse gases have not weakened the equatorial Pacific trade winds as expected.
--Pi zero (talk) 23:39, 6 August 2014 (UTC)Reply[reply]