Talk:Australian–US team of scientists finds Atlantic warming causes Pacific climate trends
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Revision 2791878 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 23:30, 6 August 2014 (UTC).
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Revision 2791878 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 23:30, 6 August 2014 (UTC).
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The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
- Stylistically, this lede is also weak in that it really should be much shorter. For instance, when I made it a lead on the main page, my summary sentence read
- A team of scientists from Australia and US has found an explanation for why increasing greenhouse gases have not weakened the equatorial Pacific trade winds as expected.
- --Pi zero (talk) 23:39, 6 August 2014 (UTC)