Talk:BP lose laptop containing sensitive claimant data

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Review of revision 1204561 [Failed][edit]

  • Special software: Cnn article, 4th paragraph, "The loss of the laptop, which can be remotely disabled", Will have that rephrased because I was assuming they had w:LoJack. Phearson (talk) 04:35, 30 March 2011 (UTC)
  • ENWiki on the article listed, makes that claim of the amount of oil spilled. I have added the ref from there to here. Phearson (talk) 04:41, 30 March 2011 (UTC)
  1. The ref format is never used on Wikinews articles.
  2. Wikipedia is not considered a reliable source; you may, from there, lift the source they cite - provided it is accessible and you have verified it backs you up.
  3. This could do with far more use of active voice. --Brian McNeil / talk 06:39, 30 March 2011 (UTC)
The error has been fixed. Though I am at a lost to what exactly needs to be active. Phearson (talk) 12:13, 30 March 2011 (UTC)

Review of revision 1204941 [Passed][edit]