Talk:Bodies found in trailer park in Brunswick, Georgia, US

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This is not ready for review.

  • "It is a chilling fact that the plantation's website boasts: "You'll be proud to call this home."" is editorialising and thus a violation of WN:NPOV
  • The article makes no consideration of the international audience. The incident is in the United States and this is not made particularly clear (FYI there is a Georgia in Russia)

--Brian McNeil / talk 12:32, 30 August 2009 (UTC)

I removed the whole "chilling fact" sentence - I can't see a purpose for it, although it wouldn't be out of place in a tabloid. I also added "in the US state of" before the first mention of Georgia. The "United States" sidebar should also be a good indicator. Is it ready for review now, or does it still need more work? Dendodge T\C(en.wp) 12:59, 30 August 2009 (UTC)

Yes, it is ready for review[edit]

Thanks for changing the problems. I do think that it is now necessary for this article to be reviewed. Rayboy8 (talk) 16:10, 30 August 2009 (UTC)

Review of revision 868881 [Passed][edit]