Talk:Boy dies after falling into river in North Yorkshire, England

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Revision 1039390 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 20:10, 7 June 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Please take note of the significant changes to grammar, removal of "noise words", switch to active voice, &c. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.