Talk:Brisbane man granted bail on charge of raping 15-year-old girl

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Revision 4222098 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 17:16, 6 June 2016 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Please do better on distance-from-source. Your writing technique should not involve starting with source passages and modifying them. There's some compact advice at WN:PILLARS#own. (There was more of that than I'd realized on my preliminary check; there followed piecemeal edits to address individual problems I hadn't seen earlier, and I got concerned toward the end as to how much it was all adding up.) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.