Talk:British PM says executive pay to be put to shareholder vote

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Review of revision 1363243 [Not ready][edit]

Two other points:

  • Is the NYT source used for anything? The "Sources" section is only to identify the sources from which the information in the article was actually drawn; site policy disallows listing unused sources there.
  • The headline uses passive voice; a good headline should use active voice.

--Pi zero (talk)

Review of revision 1364322 [Passed][edit]