Talk:Brush fire threatens Molokai, Hawaii

Review of revision 870512 [Failed]

Revision 870512 of this article has been reviewed by Juliancolton (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 02:14, 3 September 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Not ready: Sources need to be formatted using {{Source}}. There are a few other issues (minor grammatical errors, lack of image caption). Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 870512 of this article has been reviewed by Juliancolton (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 02:14, 3 September 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Not ready: Sources need to be formatted using {{Source}}. There are a few other issues (minor grammatical errors, lack of image caption). Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

I took care of some of the style problems (I didn't bother with grammar), but I think that that non-free image may not make it though the review process. Dunno though. Gopher65_talk 02:31, 3 September 2009 (UTC)

Thanks, I'll figure out the rest now that I'm back from work. I'll try to find a better image too. Drew R. Smith (talk) 09:45, 3 September 2009 (UTC)

Ok, I found better images, but they're just general pics of Molokai and a chinook and bucket... Also, I have a different commons account and when I came back to wikinews I didn't realise it logged me in as that one, so the last change under Ender The Xenocide, was me. Drew R. Smith (talk) 10:13, 3 September 2009 (UTC)

Review of revision 870634 [Passed]

Revision 870634 of this article has been reviewed by Dendodge (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 10:54, 3 September 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Everything seems to check out—the style issues mentioned last time this was reviewed seem, to me, to be resolved. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 870634 of this article has been reviewed by Dendodge (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 10:54, 3 September 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Everything seems to check out—the style issues mentioned last time this was reviewed seem, to me, to be resolved. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.