Talk:California campus pepper spray police suspended

Review of revision 1327023 [Not ready]

Revision 1327023 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 22:34, 21 November 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: Watch that passive voice! Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1327023 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 22:34, 21 November 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: Watch that passive voice! Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 1327027 [Passed]

Revision 1327027 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 22:39, 21 November 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1327027 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 22:39, 21 November 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.